Just Hold Me For Awhile (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

I can really relate to this one....you describe it so well!

Andrea

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

marvelous depth of feeling ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Wow! I can really relate to this one- this poem was just the right length, too, and it has such depth of feeling.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Linda...profound emotional write...I felt the deep pain in this write.....love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Poignant words of hurt and sorrow. Huggs to you Linda

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

No one can miss the hurting inside Linda. God bless you and keep you. Hugs ... Bill

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 10, 2004

Even In Eye's Of (God) I Will Never Smile, But, With All Little Children In Front Of Me Hugging You (In Heaven), Only Tears As You Rest Your Head On Upon My (God)'s Shoulder_

Excellently Done!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2004

Linda this is exquisite, so soulful and emotive.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Can relate to this...Lets hold each other just for a moment!!

A hug from a friend to a friend Okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Most of us have been in that lonely place where a hug could almost cure our aching hearts.I hope you know it is at those times you
reach inside and feel your essence and know you are never alone . Your creator made each of us in his own image and the reason he made you is so with your wonderful words you touch our hearts. huggs to you my friend.....

Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Oh! Dear Linda! you are not alone! Smile and smile always. Adore my heart and feel secure. Tears won't suit you and therfore smile. Your smiles are inspiration to all people suffering and redressal they find for themselves. A smile on your face and a word thro' you pen give them all the strength. You are the beacon light of hope for them. keep the light of hope burning before your vision about future. Feel free and delghted you shall be!Bye Linda!.....ceegeeess

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

very soft poem Linda, describing state we all get into once in a while, ty al

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Linda, sweetie, we'll all pullin' for you. This was an extremely emotional write. I've been where you are too. Ain't fun.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Once again...nicely done.

Michael

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

I'd say "gut-wrenching" is definitely a good description - this hits you where it hurts. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Life's not a fairy tale
We weave our own fate

Powerfully sad, Linda. Hoping you can weave in a smile or two.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

so sad, linda; this write truly captures the horrors of being lonely and depressed. if you ever need to write, i'm there. feel free to write; i'll listen.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

don't give up hope; i won't!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

A truly wonderful and soulful write Linda, never ever give up the good fight, for there is one who watches over you, and he will comfort all who seek...again, a splendid outpouring of soul.
Allen

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

((( Linda )))
For you, my shoulder is always open.
In fact, take 2.
Wonderful writing, but once again have to go gather up all the pieces of my heart.
John

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

A wonderful write looking into your torn heart. I still pray that it will leave you and bring back your smile again.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

POWERFUL introspection, and a gut wrenching (as other said)write!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Sure Linda, rest your head and shed the dread. Your poem is great. Hope you find some joy to smile a little. love and cheers G

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Profound. Gut-wrenching.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

(((linda)))

ouch. felt the lonliness and pain in this emotive write--stay strong, and don't give up--i've been where you are

(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. :(