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Billowing Clouds of Smoke
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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As far as I'm concerned, friendships are just as important as being married.


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Close friends they were
Sharing ideas...
Things from the past

Then one day...one of them
Went haywire...
Acted in an ugly way

Bringing up
Old business
To her friend's dismay

Her brain exploded
Accusations blurted
Billowing clouds of smoke

She realized
What she had done
All she could do

Was apologize
Over and over 
Again...

 



 


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 Reviews of "Billowing Clouds of Smoke"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 22, 2011
Best friends can be soulmates, lovers and yes spouses but they can also for whatever reason end up parting. All we can do then is hold onto the good part and let the rest drift into the past.
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Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 22, 2011
Hey I married my best friend thirty years ago. We are still best friends. Great write DL.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 21, 2011
In fact best friends make the best marriage partners....I know I married my best friend in the history of ever! Sometimes "I'm sorry" is the hardest thing to say....especially over and over....Nicely done!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on April 21, 2011
yes, friendship runs so very deep. I really like your reflection here and how you end this. It does take a heart filled with courage to apologize. And over and over again...well that takes lots of courage!
Blessings,
Christine


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