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I Will Love You Until...
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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When there are no more dawns
Or sunrises that make you say Aaahhh

Colors from crayons that disappear use to 
make rainbows in the sky and divine sunsets

No longer rivers that follow the currents
Or oceans of blue with their tides

Mountains that crumble into
The waterless depths below  ...

No more seas or fish, fowl have left
The bleak and cloudless sky

The sun has burned out and freezing
Temperatures become the norm

When all of life is desolate
I will love you until...



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 Reviews of "I Will Love You Until..."
Reviewed on May 15, 2012
I do believe love is the last and final breath
the one essence that even out lives all hope...

Love Eternal Forevermore...
Vickie

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 15, 2012
Everlasting and enduring Love...the best kind..
An unusual reversal here which works very well...
Diana...

Reviewed on May 14, 2012
And you will continue loving even after... lovely

Lily

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 14, 2012
Love is good. Eternal love is better. Dark and dismal is not lovely.

Ron

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on May 14, 2012
True love endures through eternity and then beyond.

Donna

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
Love is a timeless treasure ~ Excellent poetry Deborah.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
ahhhh..thats touching ...best wishes

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
So touching, concise and colorful. I love the terseness of your prose and your turn of a phrase. Beautiful sentiment expressed in each line.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
true love does last forever as you have writen so well.
Budd

Reviewed on May 13, 2012
This is love profound!

Jane

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
As always you speak from the heart and express yourself so wonderfully.
fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 13, 2012
Beautiful writing Deb, keep it up and we'll keep coming back.

Rose


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