She was looking for love Decided to go To the other side Where love is sweet With deep kisses And long caresses throughout the night She was thrown into oblivion Drowning in a sea of love She did not want to be saved She found her home Falling asleep on her lover's bosom
Part of writing poetry is how you express yourself not only in words, but also in format, and this format is not new, just seldom used. I liked both the poem and the layout...well done. If you read any of the work of ee cummings you'll notice he didn't color inside the lines, either.
A poem about “crossing over” to better relationships on the other side of love. I will not make that journey, because I have plenty of love on this side.
As you can see by the above, the only thing interesting about the formatting is that it is harder to read. You may be trying to draw some kind of picture with the words (on both sides––having to cross over to read?), but I can't see it. I refer back to your primary purpose writing the poem and that is why you changed your mode of love.
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Beautiful picture Deborah...
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Lily
is what I feel *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
Never be tired of trying new things.
Cheers,
Dan
nicely done Deb
& I like the crossword puzzle style too
Hopping Fences & Totems
Vickie
As you can see by the above, the only thing interesting about the formatting is that it is harder to read. You may be trying to draw some kind of picture with the words (on both sides––having to cross over to read?), but I can't see it. I refer back to your primary purpose writing the poem and that is why you changed your mode of love.
Ron
Anna
Love ya!
Jane
budd
Sage & Lucy in the Sky of Diamonds