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Fluttering Wings
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
Monday, May 11, 2015    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Women looking inside themselves wanting
more than casual intimacy. Looking for a connection that entails a loving and trustful relationship. Not necessarily bound by a documentation.


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Fleeting glances

Meaningless kisses

Testing the waters

Experimentation-

Fluttering wings soaring

Attached attractions

Coming of age

Stillness of hearts...



    

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 Reviews of "Fluttering Wings"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
As others have said, the final line adeptly qualifies those that build up to it. As delicate as the mood you paint, Deborah. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 12, 2015
So innocent and enticing. Better not to get into deep at this stage.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
Sometimes the best sound is the sound of silence and when love is born from it, then that is the best sound of all. Thank you for sharing, Deborah. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
True love comes quietly :)
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
...there is certain wisdom in standing stil and...in great poem
expressing it...so very well...expressing the life's "Fluttering
Wings". Thank you Deborah for sharing your words.

Reviewed on May 11, 2015
All good feelings!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
It seems that all the minor parts must be satisfied before
anyone can reach the level where hearts are still. Well said.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 11, 2015
Last line. Perfect. And the reason for the above seven lines.


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