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A Southern Reaction
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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A Southern Reaction


 


If one stirs a pile of dung,


it's stink you will get-


If reaction was intended-


Keep reading for my fit


You said, "I know you 'swallo' "


well you've never been so right-


I chew up Sociopaths,


bite after tasty bite


There may be worms in your eyeballs,


but those are an added treat-


You've met your match my friend,


and I will not retreat


True names is of no concern,


for I know who you are-


And there is no place for you to hide,


there is no place too far


Apparently you didn't do your homework,


before you decided to attack-


Or you would've known this about me-


this 'ol Southern gal, packs


I will be your nightmare,


you'll wake in sweat and choke-


and Idon T. Swallo, will be history,


with my fingers around your throat!


 


You Sir, started something I will finish


© Lisa Hilbers
5/6/05


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 Reviews of "A Southern Reaction"
Reviewed by Colonel Robert Morris (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
I love it!!! It warms my ol' southern bones.
P.S.
Thanks for your comment on my poem.

luv,
Colonel Robert Morris
'the southern troubadour'

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
Not again. Atta girl, just level your revolver and rotate 'em out.

Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Wow! I'm slipping, I almost missed this one! Lisa you are incredible!
I agree with all the others! Anyone who would take you on is brain dead!

Eileen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Lisa, did you read my blog about authors? I had you down as "Southern Lisa Horizons...frank like me." LOL. I don't know who you're talking about but, yeah, I guess they didn't study up. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 7, 2005
Tell it like the way you feel, Lisa. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
ooooooeeee!
Excellent!! leaves no doubt and I love it! Bravo!!
Powerful!!
I'm so glad it says Sir!
Thanks Lisa.xo
Tracey

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Interesting write... I doubt that Idon T. deserves the attention, but kick his ass anyways.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
luv the fire in your sails!

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Southern Belle, you've really got some style!

Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Lisa,

OUCH. I have no doubt--

I'm sorry you're being attacked. I love the way you write, you're one of my very favorites here, and know I am in your corner. :) Lean on me--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
You go girl! Kick ass!

If you are going to "turn the other cheek", make it "their's" and brand it with your name. *generic smiley*

Elizabeth

Reviewed on May 6, 2005
oh, boy...do i sense something here, lisa? hope it isn't directed at me! take care, and hope all is well; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Oh boy you sound like you are mad at someone!!

Take care girl...hope everything is okay???

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
what is this lisa, has someone been picking on you? you really gave em hell, lady

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
I am not sure who you are going gunning for but knowing you I wouldn't want to be in their shoots. Good luck hunting babes.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Wow Lisa, someones really got you pissed...you go for it girl.


Paul;-}

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Sounds like someone doesn't seserve the time of day from you.
My Mom always said, "Don't let someone live in your head rent free."
But my money's on you. This give's um what for.
:)
John

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Okay and I know it was not me because I am southern too and I pretty much pack too. Hey it has been a long time since I got all my frustrations out on whoever does these things.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
Kicking ass and taking at least one name . . . Idon T. Swallo.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 6, 2005
You go, Lisa!! This slime bags is just an impotent bag of wind who hides behind a fake name so that he/she can make their feeble attempt at his/her attacks. They are like little children who leave bags of burning dung on a doorstep then run for cover after ringing the bell. Childish and ingorant, they stir the hive with a long stick as they don't have the wit or the courage to face the consequences of their actions. Good job, Lisa! Fortunately, everyone here knows you well enough to know that whatever that slug of a lifeform writes, even if he should attempt to steal your identity to do so, will be cast aside with the knowledge that it certainly did not come from your pen. Guess he never heard "Don't Mess With Texas!"
Take care,
Sherry


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