Separate Realities
I’ve got a brand new poodle skirt
Bobbie socks rolled down
Got a nickel for the juke box
Time to wipe away that frown
We can share Coke in a bottle
Two straws instead of one
We can be-bop till we both do drop
And our shoestrings come undone
We can cruise along the boulevard
Windows all rolled down
Radio a blastin’
Wakin’ up this lazy town
Then we’ll drive-in for a burger
Hail a skating waitress there
Not a stranger in the entire place
In this small town that we share
Tomorrow gonna buy a dress
For the senior prom
A semi-formal, party, gown
Picked out by me and mom
Then I’ll dream about that evening
When you’ll take me by the hand
And we’ll dance so close together
To “Love Letters In The Sand”
Very soon we’ll graduate
Learn the work we'll do for life
And not too long after that
We’ll become husband and wife
Within a year or maybe two
We will buy ourselves a home
On the street where we both were raised
Near our family, ne’er to roam
Then in a year, we'll both decide
To have children of our own
A boy for you, a girl for me
To bless our happy home
Our life all set we'll face each day
As our parents did before
We'll be true partners through our life
To love forever and adore
As we lived our lifetime's dream
The world around us changed
The choices that we thought we'd made
Had somehow been rearranged
Our life seemed so much simpler then
From the things we face today
We lost our sense of direction
And from our families we did stray
We’ve complicated everything
Worked ourselves into the ground
We buy much more than we can afford
To turn our neighbor's heads around
It’s no longer about who we are
But more about what we buy
We have lost the lust for life, we knew
And started living in the lie
Sherry Gail Heim
September 3, 2004
Copyright © Sherry Gail Heim 2004
We should never lose our zest for life...no matter the circumstances...
Peter
God Bless you and your family
Tracey
Great write.
this is like a poetic spark from that movie
Peggy Sue Got Married
I love the way you told this tale.......its so true, so real...you are a very talented poet!!!
pax A
You tell it well.
Andrea
"Our life all set we'll face each day
As our parents did before
We'll be true partners through our life
To love forever and adore"
That part sounds wonderful.
"It’s no longer about who we are
But more about what we buy
We have lost the lust for life, we knew
And started living in the lie."
Such a sad ending.
Reindeer
Jack
It's amazing how our perceptions of life change, and what one may think is so important, is really worthless, and we risk losing ourself and everything that is real.
Great write Sherry.
Warm hugs
Elga
Best wishes
superbly written piece! I wish it weren't true!But I'm a realist!
(Thanks for your concern)!
Sandie May Angel
powerful, poignant, heartwrending truths in this stunningly written piece--start off innocent, and then try to recapture it in our later years...when it's often too late
thank you--
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
you're dating me with the 50s music--o, to have those simpler times back :(
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love Tinka
An outstanding poetic grand... "Seperate Realities" delivers a wise message trough its beautiful verses.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Thank You for adding Flowers to the Vase of Poetry.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Most excellent write Sherry! Excellent!
Lisa
this an awesome write
once I started reading
I could'nt stop.
so true to live
thanks for the walk down memory lane.
William ....love & paece
SueB