Heartstrings (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2003

Nice flow, beauty in the verses

Reviewed by Michelle Hudson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2003

I love the rhymthm of this poem.
wonderful write.
Michelle

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

great poem!!!!!!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Excellent Write

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

I do so love rhyming poetry and you do it so well! Great write. Mal.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

Nice write about soulmate, Sherri!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Sherry, this is great. I have been here, oh hell I am there right now. I can so relate to this.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Lovely, Sherry!! :) Good flow, nice rhythym.

Reviewed by Brittany Renée

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

I hear loud applauses and Hollywood producers inspired to make a film. This is WONDERFUL. The second, third, and fourth stanzas are my favourite!

Brilliance at it's best.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

what a perfectly written piece of poetry. bravo.-steve

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

I break my vow to feel this way
My heart’s yours and never free
But it’s time that I give up on you
And spend time living life for me

Like that painful decision .writing is the next joyful one you will enjoy Very nice Marco

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Such a heartfelt write, I love it when they rhyme. Well done Sherry
Jack

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Sherry, at least you have a good friend. That way you are blessed. There are many with out even that.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Sure sounds familiar and that's exactly how my life has been. It's so sad to really love someone you can't live with.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

You do more damage than you think
With this controlling game you play
‘Cause though my soul is bound to yours
It’s my heart that you betray
Oh! God I know this all toooo well
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Sherry,, I do believe there is one person in this life that is just meant to be with another one...but sometimes it doesnt work out...I loved this..floria

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Love when not returned by someone else is the hardest to overcome. You displayed it so beautifully in this poem.
Great work!
Jill

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

You are showing raw emotions here Sherry, honest and human. It's so easy to gloss over some of them in poetry and I for one am someimes afraid to let out some of the angry and desperate feelings with gusto ! This is a well written and touching read and one many can relate to.
Love Chrissie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

This one touched me very deeply as I have been in this situation.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2003

Sometimes we love people that are incapable of loving us back the way we need but that does not mean that they are not capable of love itself. Good thought in this.