Here is another poetic chapter header from the novel "Fill My Eyes". It gives the reader some idea of the conflict between them. (One is 4 the other 21 years old). As always, I look forward to your feedback.
Very sad indeed, and the photo adds to the intensity of the feelings shown here.
Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2009
Terry,
You can feel the sadness from one brother to the other. It's a sad poem, but yet tells us of the human emotion between two brothers. The poem makes you want to reach out and help both of them.
Very Good,
Linda
This is the trade paperback edition of the mythopoeic paranormal novel recounting the attempts of one Danny Blue and his friends to come to terms with a series of unusual events in his life. A Kindle eBook edition is also available.
London: Lashed, Lacerated, Lampooned and Lambasted satirizes 18 popular Jack London novellas with adult content and language and the work is author Jay Dubya's 37th published hardcover/paperback book.
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You can feel the sadness from one brother to the other. It's a sad poem, but yet tells us of the human emotion between two brothers. The poem makes you want to reach out and help both of them.
Very Good,
Linda
How sad that the child is crying out for help but left alone. Beautiful part of the book.
Mary