Beautifully expressed is this compelling and meaningful write, Terry. Sadly, you express a universal and timeless theme in this world/life. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Great job with this poem that fits the lives of many!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2010
I always feel like you are reading people's minds, when you write your poems? So many lives are just like your poem, which was so well written! I too loved the imagery that you projected with your words, to the point that I felt myself in that person. It's a shame that when you marry, everything looks so glorious under those "Rose Colored Glass's" that you don't really look deep enough into that person. Your other dreams are put aside, then before you know it, it's to late to get out as you've got to much invested in that relationship. So, the ribbons just lie together in emptiness, twisted but not together. Very Sad, indeed. Great job Boo, keep up the writing, you haven't lost your touch.
Sad and beautiful. People do grow apart and it has little to do with the intensity of the love first shared. So hold on to the precious moments, they're still as true as they were then.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Regis
Sandie Angel :o)
What a sad love story. I loved the imagery, and wanted to cry at the end. You've still got it my friend! Excellent write.
Mary