Electric Body Blue (poem) by A Serviceable Villain on AuthorsDen

Electric Body Blue
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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'. . . he would do them all day long.

He sang the electric body blue Drove all women crazy 'cause he had killer looks and lots of dough in the bank. He would get them in bed and have their heads spinning like a top - he would do them all day long. He bought them everything and then some; like to impress - fulfilled all their material needs. He could cook like a gourmet Do all yard and house work Do all the shopping and take care of the kids. He was a master plumber and could do electrical work too Could paint inside and out Never made a mess. He even did windows, would wash all the clothes, and then make mad passionate love Liked exchanging bodily fluids. He would do a massage that would drive women wild and then have sex kama sutra style #42 - the scorpion. He sang the electric body blue 'Cause he knew what women wanted - for you see, he was just a figment of their imagination! '2008' RLS

Reviewed on December 13, 2008

Oh Shoot, Sugar You had me all hot and bothered, just to leave me hangin! Twerent very nice, Yankee Doodle! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on December 11, 2008

Lance,
Like Bonnie I was going to put in my order too. Lol Excellent!

Blessings and huggs,
~Linda

darn. I was going to order one of those..'til I read the end...lol

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

Oh the imagination....grrrrrrr!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Ah yes, 'a figment of their imagination'
I like that, very nice piece.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

for you see, he was
just a figment of their imagination!

Ho, Ho! But at least most of us men can do a few of those things!

This is an excellent poem,I like the ending the best.Your work is always a joy to read,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

you never know what the imagination can bring on ;)

well written, Robert ...

Wow, that ending was unexpected but dang, this is good. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I just love that ending, Lance. Stark and real! Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Hello Robert,

I recall that song- my generation! Very prolific and amusing! You write so well! Enjoyed it very much.

Cynthia

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Wow what a tease!;-) you mean figment of your imagination you wrote the poem;-) hahaha a nice change , Lance...

Eileen

LOL..good one

Oh my heart be still!!! Pleasant dreams...........

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bonnie May

GEE, I was gonna order one...sounded too good to be true. Quite an imagination you have my friend. Quite...This was excellent...Love and hugs, Bonnie