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The Lifeboat
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'Memories would now haunt us – smash upon us as-to taunt and hamper . . . '


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In our lifeboat we rowed in a darkened sea

We were mounted upon our splintered seats

As the sight of the RMS Carpathia slipped

beneath the waves – the year was 1918.

 

Once famous for rescuing survivors from the

RMS Titanic – we were torpedoed by a

German U-Boat; taking so many to join

the ghosts before us who didn’t make it.

 

Memories would now haunt us – smash upon

us as-to taunt and hamper; but we were on a

mission of our own, to try and get rescued; the

waves pulling us through the dark and the wet.

 

Years of the sea-life were muffled out by the

sounds of survivors screaming to get into a

lifeboat seemingly minutes before the inevitable

The collision of some sort and then the sinking.

 

A crew member aboard the Andrea Doria was

ordered by the ship’s captain to give a fresh

coat of paint to a certain ‘aging’ lifeboat, whose

once proud look had been stolen by the sea.

 

Taking a paint scraper to the side of the bow

Words started to appear in layers – RMS CARPATHIA

Then  HMHS BRITANNIC; followed-by RMS LUSITANIA

and lastly RMS TITANIC; and then . . .

 

Heavy fog began to roll-in like cannon fire – masking

the liner Stockholm; the stage was set, the two

goliaths collided,; into the weathered lifeboat passengers

filed, quickly suspending all activities; they survived.

 

Now, the lifeboat sits all alone with its’ stern turned

towards the sea – all ships names erased, no longer

able to save dear ones from watery graves; but having

served for 44 years when duty called . . .

 

‘2009’ RLS


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 Reviews of "The Lifeboat"
Reviewed on February 26, 2009
Hello Robert Lance,

I marvel at the crafty way you web a story in and
hold the reader spellbound. Really a fantastic trip to the past!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Intriguing piece you have written,Amazing work Rob,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
A Powerful and gripping poem which took me there! I liked how the historical aspects were interwoven with the poem........M

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Lance,
Excellent metaphor...in the face of great sea or indeed land tragedies there will always be those of us who need rescuing, even if no external disaster befalls us; I like how this goes beyond the merely circumstantial to encompass all tragedies and losses.
John

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Another remarkable story! Memories, sorrow, adventure as your
writing captivates us!
Carol

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
The lifeboat had saved many lives during its glorious days on earth. Now it is sitting in its serenity, but good memories will never fade.

Wonderful write, Lance!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Deep, dark and full of intrigue,
you continue to captivate,Lance!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
What a fantastic tribute to honor this one brave soldier. Blessings, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Wrapped with suspense, history and emotion..you keep the reader wide eyed!
Hugs
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
...a lifeboat should end its life giving life...maybe it should be burned for heat...

Reviewed on February 13, 2009
Fantastic write, Lance; awesome!! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on February 13, 2009
This is outstanding with such vivid imagery. It is also filled with nostalgia and sadness of that tragic event.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 13, 2009
MAGNIFICANT write and Kutos for striving higher, you are definately close to the top...have no idea where you go from there but Congrats..you keep out doing yourself...love and hugs, Bonnie


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