A Secret In The Forest (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

What lovely cadence and imagery. A great comfort for those longing
to understand the transition from this world to the next.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

This was breathtakingly sublime to read Retta. Magnificent

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

beautiful. felt the spirit and the burning sun.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2004

Your words are always moving and heartfelt.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Amanda Criggstone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

You took the reader on a wonderful contemplative journey here! This is really special poetry!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

Always pleasant and beautiful. Bill

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

Beautiful, moving poem....great writing!

Andrea

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

The sun rises and the sun sets and I squat once in a while too. Candy

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

a wonderful moving write, but full of hope and comfort. The ending was simply perfect to me. This is how I would like to feel, if I lost my dearest one.

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

So beautiful are your words, Reindeer!

This is stunning poetry!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Oh, Retta! This is one of the loveliest pieces you
have posted. I so felt the words in this very deeply!

Reviewed by Heather White (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

very beautiful write, i just loved it

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

I love the personification in this wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

I love how you put nature in your love writes....

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Truly lovely - you are a master at this type of verse.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

This is awesome! So beautiful and moving.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

...

I come here now,
Even though you aren't here,
Even though I know,
you traveled farther than I ever could...

Retta...what a moving write my friend....excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Beautiful Reindeer...lovely lines...floria

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Retta, this is beautiful poetry. Loving words for one that's missed. Very well written as always. Lisa

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

A most wonderful secret, indeed. I like the way you write with simple, truthful strokes as you would talk, were that person standing before you. It's touching, inviting the reader to step into it.

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

This is beautiful Retta!!

Love the Picture!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

So beautiful Reindeer touched me deeply tonight..........
Excellent expressed emotions.

Peg

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

Another beauty.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

Retta,
a beautiful and well developed poem
I enjoyed this

john+