Sometimes, we all feel so alone and wonder...if anyone really listens...A response to a question asked one late night...
Listening To You…
Yeah,
I am here,
Listening to the rain tap gently on my window,
Calling me to go out,
Sit in the dark and watch the silver
Fall from the skies…
I don’t say much,
I listen,
And hear so many things,
I hear death whispering,
And the loneliness you are facing tonight.
I have faced that too.
I don’t say much,
I am not afraid to be alone.
Even when I am surrounded by people,
I sit in a far corner and watch them silently.
I listen very well,
And see things others often miss.
Sometimes at night,
When it is so quiet like this,
I like to say the names of people I have met,
Through poetry as they pass through my life.
I like the way they feel on my tongue,
The images they conjure up in my mind.
Many would think I am strange,
To say such things,
But I don’t talk much,
Never found the words,
They stick in my mouth like glue,
But I listen real well.
Late at night,
When the world is sleeping,
You feel so alone,
And wonder what others are doing,
I do too.
I don’t say much,
But I listen,
Sometimes it’s not in what they say,
Or even what they write.
It’s what they feel,
I see it real clear.
Tonight I saw it in you.
Is any one out there?
I am.
I am listening to you now.
here Reatta, I hear you and feel you. I have no problem being alone. I know how to entertain myself. Some people are a pain anyway. I'm also a loner. Other than my wife I don't hang with other people. All I need is my laptop, a phone connection at times, my golf clubs, and my little red truck. I too, like to sat and observe at times. G
A very comforting piece.We have all spent those sleepless nights and quiet hours. I wouldn't have known you if it weren't for your poetry and I'm glad to have made the acquaintence.
Retta. I know the feeling. I've written about it in "Yearnings." I just went outside and looked at the moon. It sure feels like what you wrote about. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Retta, I love the words you write. Always a gentle feel to them. Thank you.
can feel this~~~often times i lay awake at night
and these lines coind it all here for me
"sometimes at night when it is so quiet like this, I like to say the names of people i have met, through poetry as they pass through my life, i like the way they feel on my tongue, the images they conjure up in my mind"
excellent lines here open up your entire piece
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
A compassionate write, my friend. It is wonderful to think of some one who is lonely.
Rhetta, as always perfection flows from you pen. How many nights I have wondered if anyone else in the world was as lonely as I was as I looked up at the night sky. You have put that feeling into words beautifully. Great Job.
This is a marvelous and lovely piece.
I'm sure glad you're listening cause
sometimes you have to wonder. A great
message Retta.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2005
This touched me deeply inside. The photo is perfect with it. Thank you. I am posting a poem later tonight and after reading this I feel like maybe somebody heard me. The art of listening is rare, and a beautiful gift.
That kind of picture just makes me melt. I love wolves so.
I met 2 wolves, and wouldn't you know my son couldn't figure out how to use the camera? Oh well.
I know lonliness, and listening.
Beautiful work as always.
John
Verbal or written, you've said plenty in this outstanding poem. Thank you for sharing what you have to say. - Bill
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2005
Aw, in this day and in this age, this message should resonate throughout the land as something to emulate. Sigh and drat, it probably will not. But it struck a chord here at old AD and that is good. Words to the wise are these wise words.
Exceptional depth and provking thoughts arouse in me as I read this excellent piece.
"
I don’t say much,
But I listen,
Sometimes it’s not in what they say,
Or even what they write.
It’s what they feel,
I see it real clear.
Tonight I saw it in you.
Is any one out there?
I am.
I am listening to you now."
You are a gem Reindeer! This is very special, and speaks to your
beautiful mind heart and soul. You may not say much, but honey you write up a storm and all of it superb!
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Great imagery. I love that picture! Wonderfully written as usual! ;) Silver
truly enjoyed reading your work
William .....Peace & Love
Sandy
Sanilnath
Thankyou Retta..
Vesna:)
Stunning picture; absolutely brillant and stunning write!!
Best wishes,
Robert
and these lines coind it all here for me
"sometimes at night when it is so quiet like this, I like to say the names of people i have met, through poetry as they pass through my life, i like the way they feel on my tongue, the images they conjure up in my mind"
excellent lines here open up your entire piece
Or Is There Even Anyone Here_
Unique N Different Write Right!
TRASK
sometimes communication is based primarily on listening...
EDL
Trouble with many people is they only hear what they want to hear.
Great write........
And I hear exactly what you have to say. You capture it PERFECTLY!!!!!! SPOT ON!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And that pic--GORGEOUS!
Happy Valentine's Day
I can relate so well with this one!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
happy valentine's day to you! :)
I'm sure glad you're listening cause
sometimes you have to wonder. A great
message Retta.
I met 2 wolves, and wouldn't you know my son couldn't figure out how to use the camera? Oh well.
I know lonliness, and listening.
Beautiful work as always.
John
Or even what they write.
It’s what they feel," ~
Wonderful observation indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
This speaks to the individual. Almost as though it roots itself into the soul.
Absolutely wonderful write. It says so much.
Lisa
"
I don’t say much,
But I listen,
Sometimes it’s not in what they say,
Or even what they write.
It’s what they feel,
I see it real clear.
Tonight I saw it in you.
Is any one out there?
I am.
I am listening to you now."
Niley
beautiful mind heart and soul. You may not say much, but honey you write up a storm and all of it superb!
Eileen