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Uneasy Sleeper: Dawn's Glory
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Dawn’s glory reaches for me,
But I only see,
Strange hues in the sky-
The hawk screams his haunting cry,
Seeking to feast,
On the lesser beasts…

The tiny sparrows circle over me,
Singing their morning greetings,
But I am deaf to their meaning,
Do not listen to their song,
Feeling something in me,
So wrong…

The wind rises,
Trying to signify,
But I can only sigh,
And look away,
The glory of the day,
Burning my eyes,
The intense blue of the sky,
Making me feel as if I want to cry…

Too much beauty for me,
I cannot bear it,
Can’t seem to see,
What it is suppose to mean…

But the dawn doesn’t care,
How I feel today,
And the golden rays of the sun,
Is filling my heart with warmth,
And before the morning is done,

Dawn’s blazing glory reaches for me,
Trying to make me see,
The world as it was made to be,
Beautiful and so serene…

The winds bear the world’s news,
And chases away the blues…
Chasing away my thoughts of you,
And all the things you do-

The golden poppies sway in the breeze,
And the squirrels chatter and tease,
As I walk along scattering their food,
Their scolding lightens my mood…

The world at dawn,
A thing of such beauty,
I find my sadness is gone,
As the new day arises,
I am filled with surprise,
To find my heart full of hope once more,
The morning breeze giving me the love I seek,
And I no longer feel so weak…

All the world lies sleeping,
As I walk in this new day,
Loving how the dawn’s glory,
Makes me feel today-




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 Reviews of "Uneasy Sleeper: Dawn's Glory"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
very beauitiful, this grabbed my attention right away

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
This is excellent write ...
Nice to read your write ...
Keep writing great .....
Keep doing great and challenging work

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Your writing always makes me feel as if I've taken a vacation form the daily grind of reality. So glad I've met you.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
The beauty of dawn is captured and it's so inspiring. Wonderful!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Beautiful imagery ... just magnificent Reindeer!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Reindeer....uplifting write my friend.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
a very beautiful scene you have unraveled...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Splendid write Retta!!
This was eal nice to read so early in the morning...on this side of the world!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Eary morning is my favorite time too, Rein. Your writing as always is superb!


Lyf
tony:)

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
A wonderful poem full of real emotion and real truth! This is fine, fine work, Reindeer!

"Too much beauty for me,
I cannot bear it"

Such a very vulnerable and HUMAN observation, an small, grudging admission of the chaos that lurks within, even in the face of beauty! Fantastic!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Nature is a great way to remember the joy of living!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
I love this reflection in nature. Much needed this evening.

(((hugs)))
~Jackie~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Reindeer ,glorious uplifting poetry,your keen expressive words are splendid to read!


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