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A Tribute To Phantom and Lady Raven
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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* This was a group challenge and the writers were:
1. Reindeer
2. Sanilnath G
3. LilCaesar
4. The Phantom
5. Raven
6. Reaper
7. Reindeer
This lovely page was created by Sanilnath and I as an anniversary gift to Phantom and Raven. To view this page click here:


http://www22.brinkster.com/reetam/rein/challenge/index.asp?pid=1


Thank you for making their 4th wedding anniversary special! Please feel free to leave a comment or wish them Happy Anniversary!






Poem Artwork

A Tribute To Phantom And Lady Raven






Phantom;
An enigma behind the mask,
Dark and brooding thoughts,
Haunting his past-
But Sweet Love,
Was hiding in the shadows,
And the Lady Raven,
Emerged from the shadows,
And wrapped her dark wings around him,
Captured and filled his heart,
With the pureness of her soul,
In her heart beats the hope,
That one day…


We will stand together as One,
My dreams are yours,
And your dreams are mine,
We shall stand together for all time,
To prove that love,
Is stronger than the darkness,
That lives in your heart…

And in your mind Phantom
I'll shield you from the past
Promising you a pleasant future
Forever will our love last
We deserve to shed some tears
After Four wonderful years
For one of them you was away
And everyday I would pray

For.....

your safe return, my how my heart did yearn,
While I was away facing death in the face,
You were at home, heartbroke and alone,
But now I'm here with you wrapped in my arms,
No more fears, protecting you from all harm,

For better or worst....

For better or for worse
Those were the words we spoke from the heart
The words that cemented our holy bond
You are more than any thing I could've imagined to want
We only begun this life long journey.....

As we take this journey,
I will hold you in my arms,
We will see where life takes us,
As we walk on this path,
chosen by our love,
In you I seek...

The redemption of my soul,
The peace and love,
I have always wanted to know,
And in return my love,
I give to you,
Though you do not ask,
The heart and soul of,
This man behind the mask…


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 Reviews of "A Tribute To Phantom and Lady Raven"
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Wow, this is excellent!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
Spectacular write well done for this challenge!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
A beautiful Tribute
excellent piece

William

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
A truly beautiful piece
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
I bet you could turn this into a novel. You have it in you lady! I am very impressed. AS ALWAYS when I come to your den. Bless your heart. Fine work.

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
So lovely and very unique!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Wonderful write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
A wonderful journey with two people celebrating through your pen :0)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Rein,
This is fantastic of course. But then I am bias when it comes to your poetry {{SMILES}}}

Ye te he,
Walk in beauty,

Peg

Reviewed by Paul Bruce (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
A great team effort, I can see your influence at work, well done

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Wonderfully romantic...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Reindeer everything you do is done with class and beauty! I'll check the page later.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Reindeer you are a superb writer..this is so well written and interesting to read...I will visit that page later....floria

Reviewed on November 30, 2003
terrific stuff, reindeer! and lady raven and phantom: congrats; may you have many happy and beautiful years together! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed on November 30, 2003
(((reindeer)))

a most deserving, beautiful tribute

congratulations to phantom and lady raven--may you have many more years together!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Hope your journey, and theirs, gets better and better!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
This is wonderful!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
excellent

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Awesome........
Thanks for sharing this........

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Beautiful Write.


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