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Your Life
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Your Life

If I saw your life as an open book
I would turn back the pages
to capture a glimpse
of yesterday.

As if I wasn’t there,
but still could see
to steal those seconds
impatiently.

I would see you riding
your hair
blowing
in the wind.

Casting shadows
on the fields of green
with Ticket by your side
on an early morning ride.

People would come and go like an ebb tide
touching your life and disappearing
under your toes like sand
slipping back to the sea.

I only know you
for who you are now,
but in your eyes are all the things
that I could be.

Locked deep inside softly it beckons me…

A whispering benediction
on a slow moving train;
that keeps in time
with the rhythm of the rain.

For what I see
is truth to me
in a glimpse
of eternity.


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 Reviews of "Your Life"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Excellent writing!

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
...with the rhythm of the rain...mmmmm love that kind of rhythm. nice symmetry and form...seems you have been touched by a sensual inspiration...**Mari**

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
brilliant write that speaks volumes about love and feelings, well said...Mark...

Reviewed by Cles Wilson
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Excellent write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
really like the allusions of movment in this poem...

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Tim,
This whole piece captures the heart, but I am really drawn to this...

"People would come and go like an ebb tide
touching your life and disappearing
under your toes like sand
slipping back to the sea.

I only know you
for who you are now,
but in your eyes are all the things
that I could be."

Love those stanza's!!!

Your love for your wife is beautiful!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Tim, your writings are a pleasure to read... aloha - Tiana

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Like La Belle said, you never disappoint your reader... Lovely and so surreal..
Jenni

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Mystical and lovely. I am never disappointed when I read your work!

Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Wonderful write!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)


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