There was two men were who were walking,
Down a path one sunny day.
They talked of all the faith they had,
As they went along their way.
Then all at once to their surprise,
They came upon a bridge.
A bridge of rotten boards and rope,
That spanned from ridge to ridge.
“I believe this bridge will hold us,
We have not a thing to fear”.
“I’m sure if this bridge was not safe,
They would not have it here”.
“I’m not afraid to cross it”,
”Its just too far to go around”
The two men talked the big talk,
But still they held their ground.
The men talked back and forth all day,
About how much they believed.
That the hand of God would keep them safe,
And they would not be deceived.
But though they “believed” that it would hold,
And see them to the other ridge.
The two men would not practice “faith”,
Until they stepped onto the bridge.
Greetings, I just now discovered your page and if this is any indication of how you write poetry then I am sure going to enjoy reading it. This is really good! - Vic
Reviewed by Vivian So (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2002
Very good advice! We can have all talk, but no faith until we perform it with it. Thanks for the poem.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2002
Love the way you expressed those memories in this...
Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2002
What a excellent write...Really, enjoyed this..
Be blessed.
Betty
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
Oh we of little faith?
I like this one......
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
and this one stuck in your memory, must have hit home.
enjoyed this.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
How well you expressed this Spiritual truth.
Great write young man. Bill
Love,
Beth
Be blessed.
Betty
I like this one......
enjoyed this.
Great write young man. Bill