I wrote this short poem as an introduction to a short story I posted tonight entitled "Mama". Is about the the time that I met the the girl that I am blessed to call my wife. I invite you all to read it.
Jack
Sitting in the bleachers
On the sidelines at the game
My life would very soon be changed
And would never be the same
She had blue eyes that sparkled
A smile so very sweet
Her hair was soft and curly
Red sneakers on her feet
It was on that night I found her
Or should I say that she found me?
From that time, we have been in love
And will forever be
First love always has the pangs of innocence that you so vividly painted for us. What makes it more beautiful is that it still thrives :)! Lucky lady!
Sandy
A lovely and tender poem. She must be very special.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
sometimes two hearts touch and their lives are forever changed... What a wonderful thing to have happen to you. What a beautiful poem about the special one in your life.
Jack,
This is so beautiful, and a very inspiring poem!
Maria
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Jack, your poems are so pure and pretty.. Im a real sucker for rhyme and you do it well.. Ahhh.. how well I know this lovely feeling of romance and love.. you write from the heart and it sings. So sweet. katy.
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
In this heartfelt romantic memoir, Harry and Elizabeth share their passions and feelings about the poignant events that brought them back together after being divorced and estranged for almost twenty years. Filled with emotion, suspense, and humor --
~Kelie~
Sandy
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=51556
Be still my heart..
Such a beautiful
tribute to your wife.
Trixie :)
Reindeer
Chrissie
William
This is so beautiful, and a very inspiring poem!
Maria
Great write.
The Voice
Nancy
right;-)!!!