Jack, your message is so strong. I hadn't thought of it your way. Now I can see that all I am is a series of memories good and bad. And I guess that is why I am usually
blue. Too many bad memories. Bill
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
"We are the sum of what’s behind us,
Back to the time where we began.
There are no memories of the future,
For that’s a place we’ve never been."
Wonderfully done, Jack...enjoyed reading
it so very much!!
A lovely tender write. I enjoyed this very much ~Trish~
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
Oh, Jack.. this is so soft, so tender and so very lovely. Your dear heart coupled with your wonderful way with thought and rhyme has given us some true beauty to read here.. I just love this. katy.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
Nicely done, and with a reference to Universal Memory. Kudos on a fine poem.
~E
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
enjoyed every verse you are a poet of this time.
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JC xoxoxoxo
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Awesome write...
Trixie :)
blue. Too many bad memories. Bill
Back to the time where we began.
There are no memories of the future,
For that’s a place we’ve never been."
Wonderfully done, Jack...enjoyed reading
it so very much!!
Memories in motion,
That’s what I truly think we are.
We leave a trail of memories
On a path we’ve traveled far.
just such a lovely thought,
Reindeer
"So I like to take my feelings
And my past and write them down.
For somewhere in the future
There my memories can be found."
Love this.
"And as they read my memories
They will shine just like the stars.
For what we did and what we said,
Is truly who we are. "
Excellent write. Peggy
Is truly who we are.
That said it all
ENJOYABLE READING
WILLIAM
~Kelie~
~E