Saying Goodbye (poem) by Jack R Roberts on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

oh Jack!!!
You are soooooo talented!

You give this such grace!!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

I'm with Vic on this one.
Your title threw me...thought you were leaving AD. So relieved, Jack. Please don't ever go!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

This was excellent...I loved your poem here, I agree with Ms. Taylor, should just leave on a boat ora train!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

A sensitive and thoughtful poem Jack and written beautifully.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

I really enjoyed this piece. I never like to say goodbye. I just like to say "see ya later"....Great job in this! Teresa

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Excellant Work Jack...BRAVO!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Yeah I feel pretty much the same, I'd find another word...

Very well-written poem :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

outstanding job, jack! :) (((HUGS))) hope you aren't leaving ad; it wouldn't be the same without you! :(

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Jack this is wonderful...there is no end to your poetic talent!! I don't like good bye much..I say....seya mate! :)

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

See you later is definately my favorite. Sometimes it may not happen in this life time but by faith it will happen.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Thank you for the sharing of your thought of goodbye. I feel I know you better now. Great write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Jack,,,this is really good! I started to write on this the other day,,but just couldn't get it to work,,I'm glad you done it for me. Yours is much better too! Lisa

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Wow.. Well, I am guilty of the same thing.. Have never said Good bye.. Was afraid it meant forever and at times it does... Ahhh but in my lesson .. if I had to it again.. I would have said good bye.. and let that person say it to me.. Because now .. in the end.. one does not even have that. Great write.. Ouch.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

I agree with ~E~
Glad your not gone from AD

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Jack...superb write my friend...great thoughts here...BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Excellent wtite Jack
No good byes are ever the same

William

Reviewed by Heidi Klein (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Jack, this is beautiful ... so nicely said. Whatever situation brings the goodbye, it never is easy. You've done a wonderful job conveying this sentiment.

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on April 28, 2003

Good job Jack! I really enjoyed this one!
Bonnie

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Good-bye does sound so final doesn't it.(( so farewell, so long ,see ya later is more appropriate.)) Keep up the great poetry until your gone. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

I think death is cruel. Somehow I feel God should have sent us home on a train or boat somehow. No dead bodies, just get on a train and you leave. Nicely done, Jack. Thoughtful.