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Unitoum - Meaningless Activity and Without Purpose
by Ersula K Odom → (All Poetry by Ersula K Odom)
Sunday, January 7, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Written to learn poetry and is a part of my Poetry By The Book collection.

UNITOUM - Meaningless Activity

Determination is the mother of dedication

It Breeds the repeated action

That leads to Endless motion

Dedication is born without emotion

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It Breeds the repeated action

Thus Mindless reaction to life

Dedication is born without emotion

Though real, it is no more than Mush

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Thus Mindless reaction to life

Become Meaningless to those who watch

Though real, it is no more than Mush

Mush repeated turns into Manure

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© 2005 Ersula Knox Odom

UNITOUM - Without Purpose

Determination

Breeds

Endless

Dedication

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2

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4

Breeds

Mindless

Dedication

Mush

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Mindless

Meaningless

Mush

Manure

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© 4 28 2005 Ersula Knox Odom

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Reviews of "Unitoum - Meaningless Activity and Without Purpose"

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 8, 2018

I get the point you are making. Dedication or loyalty can be hammered into brains through repetition of chants, songs, Scripture or slogans. Repetition simplifies life and makes it easy to make decisions, even if they are wrong. Becoming dedicated usually makes one's mind, brain and thinking mush.

Ron

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