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Divided as two

by Elisabeth Barstowe — Read all 441 poems by Elisabeth Barstowe

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Only the strongest of hearts
can survive a draught like this.
And only the weakest of minds
can sit back and do nothing in times like these.
My SOUL survival takes precedence
and I am still committed.
For you are after all
my other half:
The ONE that completes me
and heartshapes my soul.

In times of trouble I turn to you
to complete the cycle and ignite us again.
Love is equal, love is true
and I am on that train again.

To search for what I came for
a yearn for similarities.
A longing to share my thoughts and ideals
to create a mind of unity.
United in bonds of words and touch,
lips open to sound two minds.
And lips locked to fire two souls,
to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one.

 



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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
This is so romantic and expresses such beautiful sentiments!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 30, 2009
Elisabeth, this work is from a pen that knows great creativity -- I enjoyed it -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
I enjoyed this fine pen... Beautiful.

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
Wow Elizabeth this is so romantic and dripping with emotion.
We all seek to find ourselves in someone else.

I can relate

Jerry

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
And lips locked to fire two souls,
to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one.

Fabulous lines portraying the ultimate quest. Patrick

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
Always pressing forward with positive verve to become the best we can be, and doing it with another soul of like mind. A beautifully romantic goal worth fighting for. Nicely expressed.
richard

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one

Sweet and deeply meaningful sentiments, Elisabeth. Very well-expressed. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
Well mastered piece liked it


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