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Watching People
by Denise Nowakowski → (All Poetry by Denise Nowakowski)
  
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Watching the audience before the concert, during interval and after the concert was finished.


Lots of people come and go


Then they sit and look around;


There’s nothing wrong with that


Except the mere fact,


That doing this they are content.


 


What a waste of precious time.


What a waste of a person’s life


To be talking shop


Or discussing other’s lives.


 


The bell rings,


The lights are dimmed,


A hush follows,


The mood is set.


 


Then the actors on the stage


Sing and talk and seem a fool,


And the audience, laugh and laugh,


Till their tears form a pool.


 


When the actors disappear


And it’s time to stand and go,


All their talking starts anew,


As the lights, come on.


 


What a sorry sight they are


Bobbing, laughing like a clown,


All dressed up to their teeth they are


When, at last they all fall down.         


                                                         


                    © Denise Nowakowski, Aug 2002        


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 Reviews of "Watching People"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
well done

Reviewed by Michelle Smolen
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Hello Denise, I'm a "winter writer",lol, so I haven't been on for a while...but this is wonderful, surprising and so true! Love it!
Brightest Blessings, Shell

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
I've noticed the superficiality of crowd attending concerts, too...very nice..

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003

EXCELLENT! Your mind is brilliant. The falling down at the end... The metaphotic value IS PERFECTION in itself! YOU ROCK!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
A pretty poem that seemed to end on a sour note. Maybe I just didn't understand.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Interesting views, Denise.


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