Ah, but from such feelings your create such wonderfully creative poetry! I enjoyed!
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
If she's proper, she's unattainable for me.
Bob H
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
You don't just write, Roger, you create, you cascade, you paint... there is design in your phrasings.
'fool...feel' I felt the self-effacing melancholy, yet there is no plea for sympathy, instead, this reaches down to where these feelings lurk in all of us. You expose yourself on your own terms... and this reader "gets" that. I love this poem. katy xox
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
Wow, BEAUTY AND THE BEAST is too cool!
I like your format and the flow is as smooth as velvet on perfumed skin. The imagery is rich and vibrant while the writing is crisp, clean, crackling.
There is no mystery on this journey to hell. You are witness to the crimes dealing out the death sentences... each justified by one of the seven deadly sins.
Enter a glamorous world controlled by one of San Francisco's ultra-wealthy socialites an
When I wrote ths book in 2000, I was concerned about children having access to the Internet and to chat rooms where "you can be anyone you want." Here we are many years later and the situation with children talking freely to stangers on the Internet
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'fool...feel' I felt the self-effacing melancholy, yet there is no plea for sympathy, instead, this reaches down to where these feelings lurk in all of us. You expose yourself on your own terms... and this reader "gets" that. I love this poem. katy xox
I like your format and the flow is as smooth as velvet on perfumed skin. The imagery is rich and vibrant while the writing is crisp, clean, crackling.
~Mari
Spot on! Sparse words, carefully selected, pack quite the emotional wallop; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Enjoyed the poem...going to blog
Eileen