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Hibiscus
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Now that the actual work in the garden is diminishing, perhaps I can write more about it.


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You don't belong
in my New England garden
dressed up like a hooker
at a Methodist convention.


Your curves -- too sensual
your colors -- too vibrant
you make the daisies blush
with your sexual impropriety


You don't belong
but I planted you
because, in gardens,
as in life,
a bit of the tawdry
is taste-full


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 Reviews of "Hibiscus"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 28, 2008
Free flowing flowery poem. Can smell that hibiscus right now. Love flowers of all kinds. The photo is great too.

Reviewed by Marge Fulton
Reviewed on August 26, 2008
I am enjoying your masterful poetry! We have red and black hibiscus in the yard. So showy!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
A hooker at a Methodist convention? HA HA! What a cool image that is!!!!! I'm glad I didn't miss this one Roger! Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
flowers are like people huh?
all the same........yet different faces........
I totally agree with this idea......
I see the same thing all around in nature......even stones, actually, especially stones.........

time to garden again :) pax A

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 25, 2005
Hahaha! Roger, I'm catching up on my reading and I'm soooo glad I didn't miss this poem ... it's wonderfully triumphant!

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on September 22, 2005
Roger.. what a treasure!!!! (lmao) you amaze me in the most delightful ways!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 17, 2005
A lovely ode to a lovely flower. Thank you for sharing this offering, Roger. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Rosalie Gattuso
Reviewed on September 5, 2005
How sensual! Love it and everything you write!
Yes Rodge it is I

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
"A bit of the tawsry is taste-full". What more needs to be said?

Bob H

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Roger, HIBISCUS is fantastic. It does the can-can like a stunning Vegas show girl!

Tawdry can be quite fun!

~ Mari

Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Ah, loved this! Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Very nice - spare verbage can say a lot...loved the comments on your bio page!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on August 12, 2005
This is fabulous I just planted peppers this morning in the Arizona morning light. Now I want to go out and stare at the dirt and dream of what will be.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 10, 2005
Roger,

Awesome capture of sensuality...the picture and your poem!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
So your the one that planted me! :-) Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
"Action/Thriller" is it? Mmmm Hmmm... of course, the poet is, indeed, everywhere! in this completely original, creative (dare I say) ditty.

Compact quartets that burst and bloom... even the flowers were giggling. To say I love this one would be a gross understatement... so, rather than go for other expressions I'll just say it louder: I LOVE THIS ONE, ROGER!!! (grin) You are, beyond most, a master metaphor-er. katy xoxox

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Perfection, Roger!
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Down here in Baptist land tawdry is normal. Nice tribute to a beautiful, though short lived, flower.

Ron

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Excellent write about a beautiful plant...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Well! I dare say the petunias and the wild onion, never mind poor little daisy, are just agast at the tart you have introduced in their garden. Of course, the elephant ears and the cacti are already sharpening their best seducing lines.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
I love hibiscus and the way you crafted this poem matches
its beauty! Wonderfully written, Roger!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
Most outstanding!!

I think I know how this hibiscus must feel....like I did when I joined AD...the outcast from South Africa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
"as in life,
a bit of the tawdry
is taste-full"

This I will have to remember, you are a man just chock full of little tidbits of info aren't you...;) Ed

Reviewed on August 7, 2005
EXCELLENT write. A garden won't be a garden without something wild in it. Otherwsie the garden would be so boring. Great idea to plant the Hibiscus to bright up your garden.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
An excellent ode to the Hibiscus, Roger, one of my favorite "flashy" flowers.
Take care,
Sherry


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