We frolick in drifts of snow
Cling to each other in torrents of rain
Comfort each other during trials of woe
avowing our love again and again
In passionate embrace we share this life
experiencing its bliss and its pain
devoutly entranced in our dance of delight
avowing our love again and again
Gwen,
This has a beautiful flow, and I really adore this stanza...
In passionate embrace we share this life
experiencing its bliss and its pain
devoutly entranced in our dance of delight
avowing our love again and again
Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
the emotion of this will melt the snow away
great write so smooth and romantic
Reviewed by Bill Murray
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Beautiful! Gwen ... this is how love is supposed to go! Love it! Bill Murray
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
Excellent write!
LM
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2002
How lovely, Gwen.. it sailed right into my heart.. I read it twice. What a gentle, loving write. katy.
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John
This has a beautiful flow, and I really adore this stanza...
In passionate embrace we share this life
experiencing its bliss and its pain
devoutly entranced in our dance of delight
avowing our love again and again
Hugs,
Maria
great write so smooth and romantic
LM
Keep writing.
Happy New Year to you.
Glenna
Love from India - Joel -