I gazed with skepticism wondering if I'd dare.
If I were to fail, would anyone care?
It was so vast and wide - this long forgotten sea!
But I dove straight and strong to save what was left of me.
I braved the deep end of a pretentious calm,
To find a treasure cradled in my palm.
DARING...AND THEN, THOUGH IT ALL, FINDING THE 'TREASURE' OF...YOURSELF. A MOST ENJOYED WORK, DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Very nice! What a vast a wide sea indeed. But your resolve brings hope and a treasure. This is very good.
Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
I like how you have a straight-forward approach. This one is a guiding light, and is very clean. Thanks for this, Poetess. What's in your palm; do you still have that treasure?
WHISPERS OF THE HEART is artist and author J. Allen Wilson's second book of poetry.It can be autographed and shipped within 48 hours of order. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
Anna
Lovely Flow & Beautiful Rhyme
Sea Tide & Sandy Toes
Vickie
Regis
John
Blessings,
Christine
Peace,
Dayvid