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Odd Perceptions
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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I saw the light

But it wasn’t white

Pure gold it was

Inca’s treasure

Floating

Before my very eyes

 

My life flashed by

 

I saw the light

But it was gold

Not warm

But cold

Dark

 

I looked away

For a just moment

And it was gone

 

 

Copyright 2009  Patrick A. Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Odd Perceptions"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Lovely picture and magical words! Great job, Patrick!

Anna

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 30, 2009
It's a good thing you caught the beauty with words. Very nice.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2009
A view of life's ephemeral ways nicely done,Pactrick!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 30, 2009
At least you saw the light - so many today are always in the dark.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 30, 2009
Well done, Patrick.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Life is like that gone like a wisp of smoke in the wind.

Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Lay off the booze your starting to hallucinate LOL
Enjoyed the poem
Have a sober day :)
The Buzzard

Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Great write, Patrick; well penned! Love the image!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)


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