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Rainbow Evening
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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I step into the rainbow

The sun at my back while its gentle mists

Drift with the breeze spilling

Iridescent droplets of liquid fire

That cascade through the evening sky

Against the silhouette of rain grey hillsides and the

Spotty radiant patches where

The tiger’s eyes are now focused

Motion, pattern, weakness

I expected a pot of gold

I turn towards the sun

The rainbow has gone

As if it were never there

But it was

As undeniable as the past

I return my back to the sun

As the smoldering liquid quenches the sky

And the tiger from its crouch

Reminds

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Rainbow Evening"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 12, 2010
There is the obvious beautiful imagery in these verses, Patrick; the ending suggests much more as well. Very thought-inciting. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on March 8, 2010
Beautiful imagery....wonderful write.

Anna

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 7, 2010
Patrick,

Rainbows are such surreal images and you've captured your interpretation well here.

Thank you, ~D.

Reviewed on March 7, 2010
Patrick, over the rainbow this one, bravo, Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 7, 2010
Rainbow Evenings are marvelous things to behold.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 7, 2010
"...tiger’s eyes are now focused..." after the raging storm, the roar of perhaps a crouching one, we can see in the amidst of a "gray hillside" the eyes of the tiger.

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 7, 2010
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2010
Patrick, you're really perfecting your tools. This is great!


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