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Can You Imagine
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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In between storms and the stars approve

Venus leads the charge to nowhere

Can you imagine?

A silky wind reminds you of the day’s perspiration

Dogs gone to bed

And you seek inspiration

Nothing Divine

Just a break on a note

F Major

Surely it was the right one

But damn

Even with new strings

Something’s not right

Practice make perfect

Maybe

Maybe not

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2014 Patrick A Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Can You Imagine"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
conceptually stimulating ..

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
Just another perfect, imperfect day...I like the visual images your words gave me...
Diana...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
A new side of poetry for you that I like. But I'm not sure about the juxtaposition between the stars, the warm night, and the perfect musical note. But that's poetry…

Ron

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
Your home stars approve. Sweet notes of tranquility. e

Reviewed on May 11, 2014
Yo Cuz Pat...

When my kids were in HS many years ago, we were all in a school play, Camelot.
The Director, Mr. Gudall, always said:
"Practice does not make perfect. Perfect Practice makes perfect!"
Full Dress Rehearsals were the key to setting the mood and attitude for
the Real Performance.
Your poem reminds me of the song:
"Imagine You and Me..."

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
Those new strings just need to be played enough to get them in the right groove . . .

Reviewed on May 11, 2014
A thought provoking poem. No one promises anything to be perfect. Maybe, or may be not.

Sandie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 11, 2014
Probably more Maybe than Not.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 10, 2014
I like that your verses give pause for thought, Patrick. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis


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