You were there with me in the darkestdays of my life Never leaving my side Never thinking about the consequences, Never thought of the outcome I wonder with such fond thoughts About your unselfish dedication You brought lift into my life Hope, which was long forgotten You taught me devotion, How to be devoted And by bringing in life and light, You saw the same You gained the same Love mean devotion Never expecting anything in return Just being there devoted to me.
This is a beautiful expresion of tribute to a loved one who has grasped the true meaing of love in all its forms...together with an expression of devotion reciprocated.
Tender language and brevity of form produces a tone which will allow any reader of sensitivity to share in the emotion and relate to the theme of unconditional love.
I was most impressed by this poem!
Best wishes ,
Patrick Talty
Some write the tenderest love poems, but the passion is not in them, you can tell. This poem is tender AND passionate. Beautiful, passionate thoughts you expressed.
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"You brought lift into my life"
Beautifully expressed, Sapna. Thank you.
Tami
Tender language and brevity of form produces a tone which will allow any reader of sensitivity to share in the emotion and relate to the theme of unconditional love.
I was most impressed by this poem!
Best wishes ,
Patrick Talty
Just being there devoted to me." Great lines. Henry