Journey With Me. (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 1, 2008

Paul,

There are several messages in this piece and they all reflect your kind heart. Love the metaphor in the last verse. -Sheila

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2007

I love this Paul! You are so blessed with this gift of writing. Wonderful poem, Kind regards, Theresa.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on March 21, 2007

Great perceptions of the heart...and all its purposes, pumping life to its fullest and bring us to back to our One true origin!
Enjoyed this~
love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

cool poeming Paul

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

'this reads as an invitation to heart...........lovely :) pax A

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2007

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on March 15, 2007

Enjoyed you "Journey With Me"
Powerful and insightful write indeed!

Thank for the offering,
From the Heart of an Artist ...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 14, 2007

So beautifully written Paul, an invitation that no one could refuse, excellent.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 13, 2007

This is very profound and very well expressed write
Each quotation offers the reader
A heartfelt Invitation to experience a
Universal journey!
Rhonda It's beautifully Spoken And very true!!
Love And Peace to You always..Morning STAR

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on March 13, 2007

'Feel each throbbing beat
as this waning
engine toils;
Cresting every
peak to each
it's final toll...'

How beautifully spoken.......and how very true.

Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 12, 2007

This is so deeply moving, Paul, and wonderfully expressed in its sincere and heartfelt way. I adore the tone which you have set from the outset... even from the very first line I knew it was going to be a tear-jerker! Such spare lines and yet depth of both thought and emotion. This is masterful and compelling. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 8, 2007

Walk with me
in light
of peace and love.
Push aside
wastelands
of forgotten dreams.

These verses offer a heartfelt invitation, Paul. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 6, 2007

A Great write Paul..I like the format and images portrayed......m

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Much wisdom herein, Paul.
Beautifully expressed; feel like a breath of crisp spring air!
peace and blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

loved the lines here
the very one Lena has quoted
enjoyed the flow as well

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

"Walk with me
in light
of peace and love.
Push aside
wastelands
of forgotten dreams."

An invitation from the heart. The above verse was where I joined in... :) Thank you!

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Paul this is truly exceptional poetry. From deep within a tender yet courageous heart. A pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Wow, Paul! Great job of expressing how life (IT ALL) must be experienced and relished, and there is always our next hill to climb. Yes!

Ted

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

embellished with images that journey into the soul, pronouncing the finale that cannot be conquered but only achieved ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Very nice pen...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Sublimity, awareness in this "Journey With Me" abound in poetic colors from the rainbow of wisdom.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

It was a pleasure to read the poetry you have shared with our readers, look forward to viewing more....

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Kewl words to put on a dating thingy...
Triff questions in verse..

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

beautifully stated-i enjoyed your word use here

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

It's been quite a ride, and you pen it well.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Enjoyed this....well done Paul!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

I really love and enjoy words written from the heart-mind-body and soul. it captivates and catches the readers attention and I admire you for that. Keep writing and never stop because writing is such a great form of all releases

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Wonderful love poem. Thanks my friend

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Very nice poem...an enjoyable view of this travel and escape into the Universal journey...

enjoyable work.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

paul Glorious imagery and expressions in this gem !!!!!!!!!
"Dance the beat
of a rhythm
that pounds
an embryonic tympani
of celebration
and jubilation.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

A lovely poem, Paul, with an invitation to experience an imaginary journey of the heart. Sometimes those are he best kind of journeys.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

What a sentimental journey this is!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Wonderful write my friend. Your write is thought provoking, and filled with emotions that many of us have felt at one time or another. Enjoyed, well written my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

When are we going and how much do I pack? (just kidding) Your poem was indeed filled with both loving and painful emotion. love holly