Beyond (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 27, 2007

Paul,

This piece is thought provoking. I can't help but think the line "My fate lies dormant" is an acceptance of something, while seeing "hope and light" in another's path may be inspirational for you. Well done! Thank you for sharing this one:) Sheila

Reviewed by Pisc Arie

Reviewed on July 10, 2007

I love this writing of yours

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

Paul, A spiritual and colorful take here in this thoughtful poem.....
I love the way you hue the colors through out....

Peace & Blessings,
josie

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2007

I absolutely love this Paul. Its beautiful and very haunting and Im looking forward to reading some more of your stuff.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on April 20, 2007

I love the layers and the colors Paul...there is so much here to swim into far deeper than the surface and food for the imagination.
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Erin Collins

Reviewed on April 19, 2007

Paul,
I loved this poem. It is hauntingly beautiful.

Aurora Collins

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

A soul-reaching write, Paul. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

Wonderful writing~`*

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

PURPLE Haze - JIMI!
This is SUPER Wonderful!
I felt the flow with your wastelands, as you penetrated deeply
to understand it all~
Stay POsitive!
I loved your imageries! :)
A gem of a treasure! I plan to savorrrr!
Warmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. Thank you Paul for sharing your heart so openly and sweetly, on my corner of the den~ YOu have inspired!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

This was lovely Paul, so very beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Paul,
Beautiful verses, my friend. You have awesome talent.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 7, 2007

Wow this is truly beautiful
My fate lies dormant
But yours holds hope and light just moments
Above the horizon.
It seems to me like you did some Soul searching here!!
Excellent imagery and flow beautiful peaceful and tender
Tone great flow!!
Wishing You and your family a very Happy Easter!!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on April 6, 2007

great imagery this sent me
enjoyed!!!!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 6, 2007

Beautiful imagery. love the sentiments laced within the verses of this fantastic poem.
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Deeply felt from the soul Paul! You have such a strong voice in this intriguing piece. You are blessed with talent Enjoy your Easter!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Beyond sounds as a soul searching for pennance. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

A stunning write my friend...enjoyed this write much, great imagery!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

I like the way you combined colors with feelings. 'Appeal to lifes favor, Exhume your self" Very powerful write, Paul.......M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Wow! This is so complex and intriguing, Paul. Very gentle and yet philosophically strong. I love the voice in this: both an appeal and a lesson. Reckon your Purple Haze is somewhat more edifying than Jimi Hendrix's somehow... as you say, full of hope and light! A very blessed Easter to you and yours. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Great write, Paul. I tend to think there are no "wastelands" in your mind,howeve.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Very emotive offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

Paul this is moving poetry, truly stunning and emotive.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 5, 2007

"Beyond" flows on wise waves of life painted with the colors of the raibow of eternity.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU