A profound poem Paul and beautifully versed.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
I like your style Paul..excellent lines.and yes..love the line breaks.Floria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2003
Well, this is well written, flows beautifully, and sounds beat generation for it lacks hope. Have been reading some beat poetry lately, so... hafta say, this is darn good. Probably better than I've been reading.
Kudos. Never take yourself too seriously so that you lose what your are trying to do. {smiles]
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
good poem
very good
pax A
Sheila
Maria
Chrissie
Kudos. Never take yourself too seriously so that you lose what your are trying to do. {smiles]
~E
If someone says I'm good, I will believe that person. I will give this person my trust, I will not doubt that he/she is lying.
If something goes wrong, and I have drifted apart from this person, then it is fate that has set us apart, not his/her lies.
Always believe in love and its beautiful words. It will make both of you happy.
Sandie Angel :o)
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