The Point of No Return (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Wow! This dream must have gotten your heart pumping wildly, Paul. Terrifying imagery...glad you escaped before it got you! An intense piece of poetry:)
Sheila

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2003

Fantastic poem, reminds me of some dreams I have had that are simular, the faces are always belong to those who's lives I have taken.
Way to capture the dream.

Tom

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

You captured it brilliantly in verse

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 21, 2003

shook me up a bit. nice write

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

nightmares are to learn from ...this is not unusual in this trying time of war etc...Excellent write...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

keep that light in your view...it will always pull you through...the hands of darkness are feeding now...don't allow yourself to be fuel....

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

It seems as though the madness of the world is trying to entice you to come join the madness. [sorry, I give dream interpretation classes] Don't go to the madness [smiles]

~E

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Looking under the bed again are we?

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

WOW! Turn on the lights! This one terrified me and I didn't even dream it. sheesh! Very descriptive and a great rendering of a awful dream. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

You dragged me into your nightmare with you ..excellent, gripping poem, Paul.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Hate those nights when the demons of our minds come to visit..
You brought us into your dreams and mind..
Imaginative excellent write.

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

gripping write :) J & J

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

What a write! Gripping.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Excellent write Paul. I'm so glad you saw the lights at the end of your dream.

This one reminds me of my recurring nightmare which I had 'til I was into my 20's. In this dream I always went to a place where there were humans with animal heads, and each time I turned around and ran away from them.....and I'm so glad I ran away from them.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Wow, you are good! This
is an amazing write!
You had me engrossed
all the way through.:)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

What I see is an excellent poet with an great gift and wonderful imagination. Good job, Paul.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Wow, Paul that is one hell of a nightmare.
You captured it brilliantly in verse.
Great Job!!

tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2003

Paul,
This is excellent. The ending was so good.
Thankyou
Peg