Silver Chariot (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 17, 2008

This is the most elegant description of flying I've ever read, Paul. Your unique perspective shows a profound appreciation for an experience which many take for granted. I think this poem captures the awe and respect folks felt when soaring through the clouds was first made available to the public. Bravo! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 20, 2003

The Author did have a smooth riding on his "Silver Chariot"...

This is a poem that brings the fire to light the torch of learning. Poetry expressed with the photos of dreams that can be felt, touched, digested and admired.

I must say that this is a masterpiece when it comes to deliver what poetry means.

I thank the Author for sharing this "Silver Chariot".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

I have a thing about time so your second last stanza amazed me to no end! Great write.

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Since we're both dancing, may I have the honor of joining you? What an out-of-the-world experience between gravity and orbit!
Breathtaking!
Sandy

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Simply amazing! I fly again in a few days.. this will be on my mind.. you have taken a common event and made it soar. What a wonderful talent you have! katy.

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

There is no Time in the spirit world and this one is profound!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Loved your writing piece it was grand

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Beautiful write Paul, and I adore this line..."Tomorrow these thoughts will be keepsakes."

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

awesomely beautiful!!!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Wonderful imagery
Excellent Write!
Hugggs
Lady G.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

This was awesome Paul.

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Lovely...sounds like a wonderful flight.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Really beautiful

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Wonderful write, I loved the lines
We soar, shielded in the belly of mans folly,
guided by resolve and an eagles eye.
Dancing between gravity and orbit...

especially.
Have a good weekend!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Yep!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

This was so lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

I love the whole thing. So so soft and beautiful. The last stanza with the silver chariots....oh. Just lovely....I really enjoyed the read and it was well worth stopping. Teresa

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

I LOVE your poetry....really love it Paul...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

this was a vividly beautiful poem with very deep thoughts and truths nice job

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Paul, this has beautiful imagery. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

Loved this, my friend..
Vivid imagery and outstanding
write.:)