Very secured and locked away,
are the dreams of when I was small.
It seems like only yesterday,
when a knight would answer the call.
A magical knoll, a mystical hole,
could determine good from bad.
The choice was left to every soul,
to defend what he rightfully had.
Damsels fair, with golden hair,
would need rescuing at one time or other.
Huge white horse and sword of course,
rewards, were kisses that smother.
The lady would give a scarf to her man,
as a sign of fidelity and love.
Choose to fight as hard as he can,
or meet his Maker above.
Battles were lost but many were won,
every sacred moment was new.
Even or odd, it mattered to none,
there was always something to do.
Tip of a spear would pierce the skin,
and a scream would shatter the night.
Through open window, the sun would shine in,
and memories were lost in the light.
I liked this one so much! It was very good, these words:
Tip of a spear would pierce the skin,
and a scream would shatter the night.
Through open window, the sun would shine in,
and memories were lost in the light.
Just got to me this morning,
Reindeer
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
This is so enchanting.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Wonderful write. So simple and yet complexed.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
Paul,
Oh this was so veery excellent I love that last stanza.....
Thankyou what a gift this morning.
{{SMILES}}
Lady Peg
"Once Upon A Knight" of an early night dream, and all the knowledge of history and experience of life, memories come alive and poemization begins... Emotions are translated into words poetized to be a master piece called "Once Upon A Knight" - for mine and billion others´ enjoyment.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
This one has a lyrical rhythm and the imagery is vivid. Love it! Hugs:)
Sheila
this has me smiling!
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Chrissie
Tip of a spear would pierce the skin,
and a scream would shatter the night.
Through open window, the sun would shine in,
and memories were lost in the light.
Just got to me this morning,
Reindeer
Oh this was so veery excellent I love that last stanza.....
Thankyou what a gift this morning.
{{SMILES}}
Lady Peg
I Salute the Author of "Once Upon A Knight".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
One of your best,
my friend..:):)