It's said we must experience "hell on earth" so we will know and appreciate the difference when and if we reach the "Pearly Gate". I think some people go through way more than others while they're here, though. This is a terrific poem, showing the strength of your faith.
Sheila
Seems like it at times, doesn't it? Nicely done, Paul. A pleasure to read.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Oh Paul, I know, this made the tears fall. Touched my heart.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Very poignant,
great write
leaves one lamenting...
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Yes Paul, I've felt this way. I also feel that I've been able to experience just a little bit of heaven on earth every once in a while too.
~Joseph
Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
...Paul...BRAVO! You never fail to deliver a strong and moving right! I truly feel the last line in great depth today. Your words express my thoughts beautifully. Thank you...
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It's said we must experience "hell on earth" so we will know and appreciate the difference when and if we reach the "Pearly Gate". I think some people go through way more than others while they're here, though. This is a terrific poem, showing the strength of your faith.
Sheila
Nancy
tony
Bravo....
This is one of my favorites..
Excellent
Trixie :)
great write
leaves one lamenting...
~Joseph
~DAM~
Reindeer
Chrissie
My hell on earth!!
I think you are spot on!!
Love this write of yours!!
Love
Tinka
funny I always thought this too the last line this is excellent and thought provoking. morning Paul have a great day.
Peggy {smiles}
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$