Haggards' Halls ( Part II ) (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

"Price of freedom is very dear,
souls that wander we can hear.
Stains of justice still recalls,
Bless these walls in Haggards' Halls"

I love the last verse here!
Excellent flow and rime, Paul Im hooked! :)
Love and Peace
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on November 7, 2007

Sounds like a historical place, fraught with passed residents. Loving this. ~Sheila

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 5, 2004

I bet you have fun writing this!!!
I adore reading it!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

Sod those rebels.
:):)
Still reading
Ch'erie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2003

loving this Paul!!

Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

Magnifient...bravo!!!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Ah waitnig to see who takes the halls next
I love the way you mix adventure with spirit of conquest

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Paul,
I love the medieval feel to these! I am sure I will be telling you all through this serious, how on your rhyme is! You do it with ease and grace!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Excellent, my dear friend...
I love this series. I hope
you write more of these!!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Oooooo Paul this is splendid...oh my loss of words here...Geez this series when complete REALLY needs to be published!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

I can feel the souls wandering in the desert of lost worlds...this gets better and better!!!!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

I love this, Paul! The meter and rhymes were both great.

Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Wonderful. Excellent write. Will there be a third part?? S.

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on June 14, 2003

Yes! This is coming along very nucely Paul. Enjoyed very much!

Reviewed by Renee Bagley (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Wow I am extremely impressed by this poem! I subscribed to your Ad Site because I love your writings! Great job Paul!!!!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Super read

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Paul, what's happening in Haggards Hall is enhanced by the beauty of your poetry, the stunning rhythm and rhyme, that you capture so effortlessly~

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Great write and flow in this series.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

I really enjoyed this 2nd part. Excellent, Paul.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

This is outstanding Paul!!
Looking forward to read part 3!!
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Great reading!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Wonderful to read...
Love the flow and feel of it...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Love it !!!!!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

This adds greatness to the one before it. Will be waiting, ~SH~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

A wonderful contiuation of your epic!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Good morning Paul...this just keeps getting better. Excellent write.

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Excellent flow!
I love this!!!
Hugs
Lady G.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

GM, Paul
Part two was Great too!

tony

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Really good.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

This is wonderful, Paul. I agree with Peggy... please more!
Jill

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

War never comes without a cost that you are showing so well through this write.

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Bless you, Paul. Haggard's Halls has the flavour of a classic myth! I wish I could read the five parts put on one page..A significant poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Paul....This is free flow of rhyme my friend...excellent...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

Goodmorning Paul.
I love the flow of rhyme in this tale of Haggards Hall's. Please more. It is enchanting to read. {{smiles}} Have a wonderful weekend see you Monday morning.
Peg