Hanging Free (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 16, 2007

When you think you know someone, they can surprise you with aspects of them that were long hidden. Great poem with a dramatic ending.

Sheila

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

bullseye

wonderfully done...

I love the quote on your bio.. perfectly suits my moods and thoughts these days...

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2003

This one took me in many different directions. Oooh, the rope ending... OUCH! Creative. Very well done.

Emilie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

tHIS KIND OF gets to my neck PaUL. it's a very interesting piece to read. Hang in there. G

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

excellent moods of motion...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Strong and sad poem..

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Paul,
The speaks from a broken heart, or one that has been broken. The emotion is felt!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Deep rise of motions

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

I'm sure many can relate to these feelings of hopelessness. You said it well Paul!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

sad but expressed very well

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Great emotional write.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

"Turned my world to seed
Planted by your greed"

BOY can I relate to this piece!
As I sign my final divorce papers~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Heartfelt and sad Paul!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Superb use of words from my new wordsmiyth friend. I love your poetry.
Susan

Reviewed by harry k stammer (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Yeah! swinging from a tree of pain, great write. hks

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Hi Paul,
Fantastic write once
again...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

stark reality Paul, well penned...trust is a must, no doubt about it and you proved that point well!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Poignant and heart-choking... as only loss of trust in love can be.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Mercy. Shouldn't this be listed under 'horror'. Once trust is lost, nothing else really matters does it? Well done.

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

A good illustration of the dry cold of broken trust.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

An excellent piece, bittersweet but true!

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Interesting rhyme and metre, Paul....and a thought provoking message!
Jim :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

A very powerful, heartfelt a sad poem, Paul. Written extremely well.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Deeply emotive, heart wrenching and well penned.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

I felt every word of this fantastic write Paul..Gotta love it when a pen is held with such intense passion....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

GM, Paul
Well written! I hope my mood is not contagious.

tn

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Heartfelt and sad write,
my friend.
Excellent poem!!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

This is a sad note of thought. But one that is felt apparently by the producer of the words. I pray your hurt passes quickly and the scars are shallow and pale. ~SH~