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Haggards' Halls ( Part VII )
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Darkness pales a guiding light
and whispers claim eternal night.
To walk in patient careful step,
of every turn, one be adept.

These secrets I've entrusted you,
example leads by what I'de do.
Set your path and follow through,
fail and meet your Waterloo.

Consequences, I must stress,
hear all facts and stay abreast.
Being first to make the grade,
gets you lost in life's charade.

Heed the words you've heard from me,
future's aren't your destiny.
Now you'll feel the life that crawls,
upon stone walls of Haggards' Halls.

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 Reviews of "Haggards' Halls ( Part VII )"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Love the Waterloo reference...certain death indeed.

Sheila

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2004
Paul...I am really enjoying this...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Excellent Paul!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
This series has been most enjoyable to read.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Superduper work with this series Paul!!!!
This series really is something I could read and read it again, never growing tired of it!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Your work never disappoints me.
Excellent!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
This is a great series!

Reviewed by Lisa Gibson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Lovely! I love the rhyme and meter of this poem. It's hauntingly beautiful.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Paul,
I really enjoyed this, there is a lot of depth and truth behind the words in this write. Be it intentional, or unintentional(because I know this is a series you are working on) but it is there! Bravo!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Superb write. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
You know how I adore antiquity in language Paul....You're a poet perfect....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
You have a good series here Paul.

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Great meters and rhymes. Wonderful write Paul! I enjoyed this very much!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Excellent continuation, I've enjoyed all of these.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Heed the words you've heard from me,
future's aren't your destiny.
Now you'll feel the life that crawls,
upon stone walls of Haggards' Halls

Hauntingly beautiful written Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Paul....clap clap clap....superb!!!!


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