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Haggards' Halls ( Part VIII )
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Tried something new,for me anyway with this part. Thr last word of each verse begins as the first word of the following verse. Hope you enjoy.



Errant souls will find a way.
Determination makes you pay.
Inhibition grasps your breath
and coldness be a part of death.

Death can drown a heart with tears.
Facts turn silence into fears.
Evil waits for those who bear,
pain of sorrow through the years.

Years ungrateful, may take toll.
They cause the faithful to unfold.
Eyes of jaded frightful gleam,
have followed you throughout this dream.

Dream about a place to run.
You've had your moments in the sun.
Now the black of night will fall
and whisk you into Haggards' Halls.

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 Reviews of "Haggards' Halls ( Part VIII )"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Keeps me on the edge!

Sheila

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2004
Oh how clever this series is...Fletcher B

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
great!

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
yes, interesting and I hope H's hall don't get me, I like being in the sun Paul. G

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Oh Paul, you did not alarm me I missed this part! The technique is fabulous. An artisan follows; an artist invents - Three Cheers, Paul!!! Lovely and pathetic. moments in the sun usually end in some Haggards' Halls, in fact.

Best
Nevine

Reviewed by Robert Fullerton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
I like this one best of all your wonderful Haggard's Halls series...


Sharon...

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
How awsomely clever! Not just in the form you wrote this but that you carried it off so well.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
I loved this...such a flawless flow and love how you started the next stanza with the last word of the last stanza. Perfect!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
One word, Paul... Brilliant! (love the continuing format) Excellent message - Bravo!

Tami

Reviewed on August 28, 2003
"Haggards' Halls ( Part VIII )" It is profound and pleasing. The rhythm, lexicon and form made their points, and this new form must be Your own. (I never heard of this, or read anything in this form before.)

Pleasurable and learning reading from a Master's WRITING.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Ooo Paul you clever and crafty poet man you this is absolutely wonderful and with such great wisdom hiding in it's layers a message...I have loved each and every piece of Haggard's Halls and I really do hope they all get published!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Superb write Paul! I love this series, and this one is full of goodies!Always of course with your expertise in poetic R&R ;-)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Well done, I love this.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
This is awesome Paul!!

Very well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Wow! Paul, your poems always amazes me. It carries so strong rhythm, meters and rhyme. Each can almost create a song. Please never stop and carry on the great work! Masterful indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Love the format in this Paul....You most clever man...You've got some great words in this poem.....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Very skillfully done. Interesting change of format and play with words.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Great work!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Paul......powerful write with inherient wisdom engraved in every line my friend.....BHUWAN


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