Seething
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Monday, March 15, 2004
I see
such a rush of time,
objecting to mankind,
it’s frightening, I’m igniting
at my heedings.
I sense
such a loss of time,
obtusely, in decline,
it’s scary, I’m wary
of my pleadings.
I seek
such a blast of time,
observing essence refined,
it’s unveiling, I’m prevailing
in my feedings.
I seem
such a waste of time,
obversely, wrong design,
it’s dismissing, this reminiscing
of my bleedings.
Erin Moen
3/15/04
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saludos robin
love the style and the
essence of this one...floria
and wishes for more here...but I confess, I spend more time marvelling at your delivery and may have missed some of
the "meat and potatoes"... great read, no matter how you slice it... (smile) katy xox.
Dan S.
This could be the winner Erin?
Always superbly well written work here!!!
Kevin