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Partitions of Insanity

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, April 24, 2004

Partial views viewing parts;
booms all around, thump
into hollow spaces of insanity.

Bump… Grab fast, this frame
won’t last. Viewing particles of self
orchestrates theatric acts of insanity;
a comedy? …a tragedy? How ‘bout
I sit this one out. Can’t find the door
to the floor below me. White me out
and redraw my face, there’s too much space
in my head. Hollow, if viewed partially.

(She looks at her pencil eraser,
not startled to see
a tiny lead-smudged face
winking in agreement; she snorts,
that’s all she needs! More insanity…)

Viewing pieces pieced apart
grips frightened heart, clumped
into hollow faces of insanity.

Dumped… Fractured back to start,
control departs, self-viewed particles
disperse in the applause of insanity.
Bravo? …brava? I don’t doubt
I will fall. I can’t find the floor
to the door above me. Black me out
and undo my face, there’s too much placed
in my head. Viewed, when hollowed partially.

(She looks into her mind,
not startled to see
a tiny smudged-lead face
blinking in amazement; it snorts
that’s all it needs! More insanity…)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright4/24/04


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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
You nailed this one Erin...sometimes I wonder
just where I fit in LOL..this was awesome writing..
floria

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
so hard to tell or know the difference
you got it to a tee here
great write

Reviewed on April 25, 2004
They say that there's no difference
between the sanes and the insanes.

It takes a bigger fool
to judge the smaller fool.

It will also take a more insanes
to judge the less insanes.

Where have all the sanes go?
Where do they fit in here?

What a great insanity write this is!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
I kinda think that this 4:20 thing has gotten to you, dear Erin...I can rent you my rubber room, I have not written of it of late as I had sublet it to Kate Clifford, but she is done with it...Interested?
Any I receive or see that you have written I find of interest, Peace thru Insanity, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
Erin, I found this poem incredibly stimulating, full of images strung together so that I could almost experience the partitions of insanity. Of course, I have the benefit of personal knowledge :)... great work!

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
Your images are strong, the parenthetical notes reveal commentary on reality, and the poem shows a mighty intelligence at work.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
I agree with Jude. It's amazing how insanity can be interpreted. Thank you for sharing this offering, Erin. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
sometimes insanity can be very lucid ...

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
Very profound... and disturbing. -- Jeff


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