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Shadowed Promises Wept

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, June 23, 2004

Low skies surrounding surrounding mountains
seem haze-sultry in desert morning light,
then drown delight. Weary fight -- misplaced men
sign dignity away, Monsoon in sight.

Low clouds shadow shadowed promises wept,
no hurry spent; awkward acknowledgement
of arid tears below -- bent heaven kept
its voice too low; beseeching only meant

Man’s grace had fled. Arriving storm, aghast,
took its last chance and thundered words of woe
with fears of letting go of sky blue caste,
which paled ignited lightning’s afterglow.

Surrounding shadows shadow sultry haze,
Monsoon, again, retreats from longing gaze.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/24/04
 


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Reviewed on March 15, 2005
Erin,

Beautiful (as always) imagery ... prosed to perfection!!


Best to you,

Robert

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Reviewed on June 24, 2004
"...Arriving storm, aghast,
took its last chance and thundered words of woe ..."

Honestly, I don't even BEGIN to know what to make of this one, Erin, there is so much going on here and yet there is an odd sense of stillness that pervades the write, like looking at a black & white photograph of a stormbank hovering over the horizon.

Intriguing and arresting and, as always, written with a very stylish hand!

Reviewed by Lori Torrio (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Erin, this one is beautiful! I could see a picture so clearly... Loved it. Lori

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
It's wonderful to be back among peers like you. Your poetry is elegant and fluid. I sure have missed being around. Great write here of our world, its beauty and mystery.
Susan


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