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Desert River Peace

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, June 26, 2004

Minnows are gamboling with mud-weed greetings
in the water besides my beach chair,
placed in the shallow San Francisco River
near some small rapids -- I absorb it all…

Closing my eyes, the sound of cicadas
intensifies in the cottonwoods
that line the bank behind me;
while the rushing, gurgling water
cascades its unceasing song of fluidity,
caressing and changing my lines.
The smell of scorched desert heat mingles
with the liquid fragrance of my desert river,
salving a desert-molded soul.

A red, mid-size dragonfly lands
on the top of my foot,
the part out of water, tickling my senses
with its clingy claws. And, again,
on my uplifted toes.
It is watching its competition
on an island rock a few feet away.

The largest minnows are hanging
to the left of me, circling rocks
and finning hellos, the small ones
play under miniature water plants,
unconcerned by my gaze of delight.

I bleed my worries into the waters,
flow and flee and free my essence,
reframe my constricted mind.

Once again, the dragonfly takes up its post,
tickling, and gifting me with river peace,
from the tip of my toe
to the depths of my head.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/25/04


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Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on June 27, 2004
dear erin-Enjoyed this as thew morning sun filled the window of my room. Was very pleaseing to nread amidst all the clutter in my room of soda cans, cigarettes and dirty linen. Maybe I'll clean it all up after someone get's the world looking like your minnow lake, but I dont expect to ever look as sparking.
Your poem seems to flow more than the others, either my waters a or yours are more choppy at the time.

Marvin

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
lovely erin ... can you do this one in sidewalk chalk, like dick vandyke does in mary poppins??!?! then we could all jump in. excellent imagery.

Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Blessed is the One that hears the Voice of Nature...
"River Peace" flows from a source of wisdom... Contents and message
meet with knowledge in the ink of harmony used by the pen of the wise to depict wonders of Eternal Mother.

I slute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
This is exquisite Erin. Your use of vivid imagery is such an example. I was literally transported. Thank you! I will be reading more! Chanti

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Such a perfectly painted picture I felt I was there too! Wonderful imagery.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Splendid write Erin!!

Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Strong feelings and powerful imageries. Enjoyed.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed on June 26, 2004
(((erin)))

a soothing, tranquil write--well done! splendid verse and imagery! well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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