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by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, July 7, 2004

She heeds with exhaustion,
frenzied of mind,
elated in spirit.
Vibrates the time
in harrowing ovation.
Vacillates in rhyme
of utter confusion.

She pleads with exhaustion
in frenzied mind,
equated of spirit.
Calibrates the time
in hallowing profusion.
Extrapolates in rhyme
of biometer delusion.

She cedes with exhaustion,
crazy of mind,
probated in spirit.
Orchestrates the time
in shallowing respiration.
Procreates in rhyme
of administered illusion.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
� Copyright 7/7/04
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

This gets my attention. Well done, Erin. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis

Reviewed by Lori Torrio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2004

I love this! Where have you been?

Reviewed by Margarita Caligaris (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2004

You are One that can be described as a poetic SIRIUS. I enjoy reading your creations.

Students of all levels � HIGH SCHOOLS and UNIVERSITIES � must study your works throughout USA.

�Exhaustion� is a collector�s Item.

Margarita Caligaris, Litt.D., Ph.D.

Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

Well done on the word placement, structure, and economical use of words. The scene is painted with words well and I found it pleasantly accessible.

God's peace to you.

Craig

Reviewed by David Livingstone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

I see that your symbolistical new style is getting the attention of your readers. "Exhaustion" depicts the emotions and delivers an outstanding poem.

I like the way you present your poems.

David Livingstone

Reviewed by Eva Black (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

You have the quills, and yours are writing with magical ink. This poem is to stay and stand the millennia.

I am really impressed with your style. You progress constantly. Every time I visit your den I see that you have moved forward to perfection.

Thank for leading the way to true poetry.

Eva Black, BFA

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

"Exhaustion" strikes the mind of this reader, and a question comes:
-Is Erato, Phoebus and Euterpe having dinner with the author of "Exhaustion"?

This is the Poem! "Exhaustion" is a masterpice.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

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