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Shaking of Heads

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, July 31, 2004

Do you remember,
when you were young in mind,
and years,
how people would shake their heads
at what you said?
I got that a lot, as a dreamer,
and learned
to keep my thoughts to myself.
Where they festered and grew
into a person who couldn’t be happy
with what surrounded her;
not continually, to the core.
I doubt I ever will.

Do you think
certain values contain fallacies?
Provisional excuses?
Unsound arguments?
There are basic dogmas,
like the Ten Commandments.
Common sense dogmas,
like the Golden Rule.
And there are personal dogmas,
like being kind to animals,
or respecting whom we love.

But, we are creatures of emotions.
Emotion can overpower minds.
As easily as snapping your fingers.
As easily as shaking your head.
It seems to me having emotions
is much more complex
than chemical reactions in a body.

I think it shows we really are essence,
harbored in flesh, for now.
I think God is a totality on this level
of existence, and our essences are only
one tiny cell of God. And I think
we move as God moves through Time,
placed and replaced, constantly.

I wonder where I’ll be placed next…

Now, stop shaking your head!

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 7/31/04


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Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on August 21, 2008
Outstanding, and awe-struck to see another
Pen the words of my heart I cannot compose
Thank you for letting me read me!

Rod

Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on August 1, 2004
Yes i remember. and yes they still shake their heads.

I like this very much

Robin

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 1, 2004
Some really thought provoking questions raised here, hmmmmm, one does have to wonder truly, where and when next!

TY Erin :)
Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
awesome! extrememly wise and well written!

Reviewed by autumn blair-strange (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
i really enjoyed...like taking a deep cool breath when it's too hot so you open the fridge so you can breath right...thankyou,Autumn

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
well done


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