Savage
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, August 4, 2004
They are eating me,
dissolving my mind,
mouthing my vision,
not leaving much behind,
it is savage.
There are voices,
inside my head, my voices,
vacuous and crazy-dead,
exerting forces
of self-disgust.
They are angry,
with me wanting too much,
they say they’ve known
that I will fail,
that I will fall.
They are feeding me,
adding to hate’s weight,
blinding my vision,
it might be too late,
it is savage…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/4/04
the write is excellent!!
Vesna :)
Never listen to those little voices unless one is two feet tall and has pointed ears.(lol) Always follow your heart and with your abilities you'll always succeed. Well written